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April 6, 2009
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:iconspicysteweddemon:
I usually don't do this, but I want people's opinions. Do you think the background is too busy? Well, I know it's busy, I want it to be busy, what I mean is are the characters in the foreground overwhelmed? I've been having fits with it. Thanks!
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:iconoctoboy-the-8th:
~Octoboy-the-8th Nov 11, 2011
Heh heh, they look so hipsterish! I think the background's just fine. It's balanced just right between the heavy, squiggly pen marks, flooding their feet like tidal waves, and the lighter, more marker-y background lines that look like the network of a road map. It's cool.
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:iconberqist:
~Berqist Apr 3, 2010  Professional General Artist
My eye immediately went to the girl's snarlflirtkiss. Very attention-grabbing. I then checked out the guy as he coolly blasts his '80s vibe. The pair probably get along very well in a "Tyler & Marla" kind of way.
I love your style, by the way. It vaguely reminds me of Egon Schiele, but on anti-depressants. ;)
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:iconspicysteweddemon:
*spicysteweddemon Apr 3, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
omg, I love schiele, and I'm on antidepressants! Yay
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:iconamandageddoe:
~amandageddoe Jan 17, 2010  Student Interface Designer
I really loved the woman's expression.
but I don't know what do you want to say 'bout the background being "busy" in your question.
-English is not my first language, so...
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:iconilfie:
~ilfie Apr 7, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
No, I love it! It looks so indie and stuff! I could see this design on a shirt! It makes me think of the Ting Tings too............
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*DrewGreen Apr 6, 2009
It's not so much that the background is busy, I think that works fine, but it's that there is a portion of the design that is overlaying the characters (the swirly thing at the bottom) that I think is a little distracting. Otherwise, I think it's great! It's eye-catching and fun and appropriate!
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:iconyourfathersmustache:
~YourFathersMustache Apr 6, 2009
the background is perfect!
of all things make it busier!
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:icondrunkkiddcatholic:
~DrunkKiddCatholic Apr 6, 2009
It's busy but it works very well. The eye is drawn all around the picture to the point where you notice all the detail.

fine job!
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:iconmelii:
~Melii Apr 6, 2009
It is busy, but you could always leave the design and make the background colors stand out less. The bright colors are a bit overbearing, I wouldn't mind the background otherwise.
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:iconhorticultureboy:
~horticultureboy Apr 6, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Good picture, I do think it's a little busy, what it seems to be to me are the purplish lines and how they go through the characters legs. It'd work a little better if those lines were more in the background instead of foreground.
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